tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-991416410311733321.post5421944133724633207..comments2024-02-24T00:56:47.853-08:00Comments on Trisha Leaver, YA Author: Show me Yours!Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10736441732672508192noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-991416410311733321.post-44176752257821047742016-03-21T19:56:54.116-07:002016-03-21T19:56:54.116-07:00Banned complain !! Complaining only causes life an...<br />Banned complain !! Complaining only causes life and mind become more severe. Enjoy the rhythm of the problems faced. No matter ga life, not a problem not learn, so enjoy it :)<br /><br /><a href="http://goo.gl/ie0wth" rel="nofollow">Ciri Dan Tanda Anak Terkena Pelecehan Seksual</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/o4CYJw" rel="nofollow">Cara Menghilangkan Noda Hitam Di Wajah Bekas Jerawat</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/hk55ME" rel="nofollow">Obat Sakit Bernafas Dan Berbunyi</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/wZ3hWY" rel="nofollow">Obat Tumor Rahang Dan Gigi Atas Bawah</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/EdPYLc" rel="nofollow">Obat Kanker Payudara Yang Menyerang Ke Tulang</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/z5Ii4w" rel="nofollow">Hilangkan Batuk Filek Dengan Jahe</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/TRwfiv" rel="nofollow">Obat Untuk Menjaga Lambung Agar Tetap Sehat</a><br /><a href="http://goo.gl/uJY7PA" rel="nofollow">Cara Alami Menghilangkan Nyeri Dada Saat Bernafas</a><br /><a href="http://goo.gl/HrdsTQ" rel="nofollow">Cara Memutihkan Selangkangan Secara Alami</a><br /><a href="http://goo.gl/oIqr1x" rel="nofollow">Obat Infeksi Akut Di Kepala Dan Leher</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08703076173541541245noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-991416410311733321.post-72700537425745092692011-01-06T15:26:19.263-08:002011-01-06T15:26:19.263-08:00I love your excerpt! I'm intrigued as to the r...I love your excerpt! I'm intrigued as to the rest of what's going on here, now.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing!Golden Eaglehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-991416410311733321.post-5057743249902443342011-01-06T14:47:46.350-08:002011-01-06T14:47:46.350-08:00I like this, but I have a lot of questions, such a...I like this, but I have a lot of questions, such as...<br />What mountain does he live on, is it part of a city or outside?<br />What gender is this MC supposed to be?<br />What's the Riley Lincoln factor?<br />Are these people some kind of Lycans? (Possibly 'shifting', eating raw meat, pointy teeth, sounds vaguely werewolfish at least.)<br /><br />Thanks for sharing in the Blogfest, though I wish this passage wasn't quite so enigmatic. I loved reading it though, and I just might check in for some answers later.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-991416410311733321.post-697597959057361012011-01-05T17:07:02.407-08:002011-01-05T17:07:02.407-08:00Trisha - nice excerpt!! I really like the tight w...Trisha - nice excerpt!! I really like the tight writing. Intriguing premise, leaving the reader wanting more!Traci Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15708393153242672277noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-991416410311733321.post-62981148732162616542011-01-04T15:01:54.829-08:002011-01-04T15:01:54.829-08:00oooh, I'm so curious about this storyline! Tha...oooh, I'm so curious about this storyline! That was great. Thank you for participating!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16915603693944523761noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-991416410311733321.post-35932900160379306162011-01-04T02:42:08.865-08:002011-01-04T02:42:08.865-08:00Ooo...who is the MC? Or rather, what is the MC? Lo...Ooo...who is the MC? Or rather, what is the MC? Loved it.Ellie Garratthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03731071128348213067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-991416410311733321.post-18811997682973680492011-01-03T21:52:17.849-08:002011-01-03T21:52:17.849-08:00I was thinking vampire? werewolf? But your answer ...I was thinking vampire? werewolf? But your answer is WAY cooler. I'm quite intrigued. great job!Rebecca T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11994380364321336824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-991416410311733321.post-85013458215613103942011-01-03T20:43:54.345-08:002011-01-03T20:43:54.345-08:00The voice drew me right in :) I kind of wished the...The voice drew me right in :) I kind of wished there'd be more action in the excerpt and less internal monologue, but I was drawn in by the MC enough to keep reading. Thanks for sharing!Jessica Silvahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15405267450788581689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-991416410311733321.post-30004976397621955162011-01-03T20:28:11.689-08:002011-01-03T20:28:11.689-08:00I really enjoyed this excerpt! What a great additi...I really enjoyed this excerpt! What a great addition to this blogfest.Melissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12096764010151024050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-991416410311733321.post-75989652162111185212011-01-03T19:33:36.632-08:002011-01-03T19:33:36.632-08:00Genetically engineered soldier?! Awesome!
I reall...Genetically engineered soldier?! Awesome! <br />I really liked this excerpt--thanks for sharing!Summer Freyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04234534550255682010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-991416410311733321.post-62643814747688565542011-01-03T19:31:00.040-08:002011-01-03T19:31:00.040-08:00Lots of great posts! Get back to work so we can a...Lots of great posts! Get back to work so we can all enjoy some more.Becky Wallacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00401748069394025303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-991416410311733321.post-18232769446769120902011-01-03T18:27:40.529-08:002011-01-03T18:27:40.529-08:00Oooh, I was going to guess werewolf, but genetical...Oooh, I was going to guess werewolf, but genetically engineered soldier - that's cool. I hope you keep working on this! Thanks for sharing your work.Elizabeth Twisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03133959633383307056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-991416410311733321.post-87532964312300872612011-01-03T17:52:40.012-08:002011-01-03T17:52:40.012-08:00I can't tell you how much I miss reading about...I can't tell you how much I miss reading about these guys! Today at work I saw the name Riley and thought of them and you!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09179338199224761532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-991416410311733321.post-40170127566648264662011-01-03T15:48:37.532-08:002011-01-03T15:48:37.532-08:00PK-- I picked it because your comments in the ms. ...PK-- I picked it because your comments in the ms. I figured if you loved it then it must be good stuff!<br /><br />Summer and Sarah-- not a shape shifter. Cyrus is a genetically engineered soldier of sorts.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10736441732672508192noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-991416410311733321.post-5838730987063909372011-01-03T15:00:14.104-08:002011-01-03T15:00:14.104-08:00Very interesting. I'm assuming you MC is some ...Very interesting. I'm assuming you MC is some kind of shape shifter- wolf perhaps, but not completely sure.Summer Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08122694893668693244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-991416410311733321.post-55183248860756682362011-01-03T14:50:02.291-08:002011-01-03T14:50:02.291-08:00Well, this sounds familiar... lol! Nice excerpt!Well, this sounds familiar... lol! Nice excerpt!PK HREZOhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11650153097981426833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-991416410311733321.post-19458329418138538462011-01-03T13:33:22.262-08:002011-01-03T13:33:22.262-08:00This was great! First off, great title. Second, w...This was great! First off, great title. Second, want to know what the deal is with the deal is with the MC. Some sort of non-human? My interest has been has been attracted and i am hooked.<br />Great job!Sarah Ahiershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02795455714801965956noreply@blogger.com